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Iron Will-gift for NCH85 by Ryanide Iron Will-gift for NCH85 by Ryanide
*WARNING! THIS MUSIC IS LOUD...AND HYPER! (Rock+Techno+Rave+Freestyle+190bpm)*

FINALLY! RYANIDE UPLOADS SOME MUSIC IN MP3 FORMAT!

However, the reason for that is that this piece of music was made for and his cool flash animations. As a great inspiration to me, I thought that I would create a major gift for NCH and my other main inspirations on Deviantart.

Because NCH is such a good animator himself, he doesn't need an animation from me, so I figured why not make some specific music for his latest Flash Rave style vid,-"The Karnage Incident"

Basically, I made this song to his animation, so it suits it perfectly. I have given NCH permission to use this song in his Flash, and if he doesn't want it, it will become Reeth's theme in Rave Battle.

This was made entirely in FLstudio5, and all the loops were made from scratch. I used no presets whatsoever.

And yes...it has LYRICS. However, I haven't gotten around to recording them yet. Either way, here are the Lyrics. Some of the pronuonciation and breaks are very specific, so I doubt it would be much help, but whatever:

Note: Lyrics in brackets are sung in a different voice from the main. This is Karnage's mind talking to him.

Iron Will

Never will I fall to you
(I am more than you can handle)
No surrender through and through
(tower standing strong)
Full resistance, it's my way
(pressure is my second nature)
I'll defend my legacy
(till my days are done)
Forward now I see you move
(and my heart is pounding strongly)
All your hatred blurs my mind
(come and bring it on)
Make way now, I'm coming through
(I am getting out of here now)
I have had enough of you
(and the scent of fear)

As the battle rages on, I'm falling out of sanity
(there, little fighter, don't be shy now, don't be scared, it's do or die now)
And this haze before my eyes is thicker than it was before
(strike now, watch your back, I can feel my blood is boiling)
restraining my fear, restraining my spite
Searching deep within me for a pinpoint of light
(this isn't fair, I know it's not right-I'm fighting for my life)

*Chorus*
-Feel no pain, yet there's so much to gain
I don't know what I've become
But deep inside I'm unchanged (and so strong)

Iron Will, my soul you cannot kill
I hope you're getting a thrill
From being constantly defeated by me

All my drive comes from my right to survive
As long as I am alive
I'll keep on fighting for my stolen freedom

You're no match, no matter what the catch
Now step aside and be gone
It's time I end this game and move along

*Chorus out*
Burning more
My rage is true and raw
I'll never be the same
As I once was before...Held up by-

Courage and pride
I just want to stay alive
And if it means I must fight
then I'm ready for the worst you've got for me!

*music break*

*repeat chorus and chorus out as required*

Yes, I'm still a musical newbie, and I don't even know all the proper terms, but I feel this turned out pretty good, actually. One of my better pieces.

Even so, I'd like feedback on how it could be improved. sometimes it seems to suffer because there are so many instruments, and the bit at the end is perhaps a bit too hectic...

Anyway, DON'T YOU DARE USE THIS SONG IN A FLASH BEFORE NCH85 DOES! Ask me first before using ANY of my songs.

Tune and lyrics (c) Ryanide 2007. DO NOT DISTRIBUTE!!!1

EDIT: Proffate went through this with me and got rid of all the peaking! No more horrible scratchings, hehe!
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:iconterrortheslayer:
Terrortheslayer Featured By Owner May 10, 2013
cool :)
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:iconanthrotsuneon:
AnthroTsuneon Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2010  Student Writer
is it me or won't the music play? x.x
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:iconmika-cupcake:
Mika-Cupcake Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Download file :3
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:icontarukatheultimate:
tarukatheultimate Featured By Owner May 21, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh my gosh!
THAT WAS AWESOME!!!!
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BandanaStan Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2008
Now how in the world did I miss commenting on this?

Anyways, VERY nice work on this piece! And you said you were still a musical newbie when you made this?

As far as critique goes, I know very little about music composition or theory so I'm kind of useless in that department, sorry. I'll go ahead and give a shot at it regardless. I noticed you'd said it suffers from there being too many instruments and at times I suppose they do seem to mesh together a little too much, but it's only for two seconds at the most in the parts I've noticed.

Personally, I'd say that if you had used any more or fewer instruments it just wouldn't have carried the same intensity that it does.

It kind of reminds me of ASK in a way.
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:iconryanide:
Ryanide Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2008
ASK have always been a huge inspiration for me and are responsible for shaping my musical aesthetic into what it is now.

And yeah, even today I still consider this one of my better compositions. However, It could use more base.
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:iconbandanastan:
BandanaStan Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2008
I'd say this and Tabasco Magic are my favorites of your composition work.

ASK is a really great group. I didn't even realize they existed until stumbling upon some Savior Cat animation that used Ride Out as its theme.
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:iconseleina-scorpio:
seleina-scorpio Featured By Owner May 31, 2008
i can see the animation, my computer isnt letting me
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:iconecoblood:
Ecoblood Featured By Owner May 26, 2008
:iconpyritie:{it is really good can i use it)
:iconsasukebodyplz:
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:iconkasa-kitsune:
Kasa-Kitsune Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2008
love the rythm to it
i tried singing the lyrics in my head but its hard to keep up with the music owell still sounds cool though
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:iconkasa-kitsune:
Kasa-Kitsune Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2008
o and i no u dont no me but if i ever learn to animate can i use this song...plz?
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:iconbigrin:
BIGRIN Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2007   Filmographer
HOW IN HELL DO U DRAW SUMMIN SOOOOOOOO SIMPLE BUT MAKE IT SO AMAZING?!? oh well i guess its just u being Ryanide grrrrrr
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:iconneofantasy:
neofantasy Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2007
Holy Crap! I can't believe I hadn't stumbled on this earlier! Dude, not only are you awesome with animation...but awesome with music too. I definitely heard traces of some familiar tunes in your animations. Well done, and well strung (together that is) :+fav: for sure!!!
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:iconkdragongirl:
KDragongirl Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2007
kick ass
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:iconkinpaku-chan:
kinpaku-chan Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2007
very very cool :3 i would totally listen to it on my ipod regardless of wether it has words or not ^^d
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:iconmohamedfreezer:
mohamedfreezer Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2007
that was very beautiful work
master
the misc it,s soooo fabulous thanks master
:thanks: :thanks: :thanks: :thanks: :thanks: :thanks:
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:iconryanide:
Ryanide Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2007
lol. You really don't have to keep calling me 'master' like that. ^-^' I'd like it if you just addressed me as a friend.
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:iconmohamedfreezer:
mohamedfreezer Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2007
but ... but you are really master ryanide:no:
i like you soooooo soooo much.
but ok as you wish :hug:
but i my opinion you really master
ryanide friend .

thank you very much ryanide my beast freind.
i wish you have good day.
keep in touch:aww:

as usual thank you very much ryanide my friend
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:iconpixelito:
pixelito Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2007   Digital Artist
WOAH! thats insane! GREAT JOB!!! I'm working on some tehcno myslef, do you think that you could give me any hints?
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:iconryanide:
Ryanide Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2007
Yeah. Use lots and lots of different underscores. ;)
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:iconpixelito:
pixelito Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2007   Digital Artist
thank you very much ^^
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:iconboomerangkirby:
BoomerangKirby Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2007
WOW Omg!:wow: This is so good!:D I wanted to ask you if I could use this is an animation.:)
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:iconryanide:
Ryanide Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2007
You have to ask NCH. I made it for him after all.
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:iconboomerangkirby:
BoomerangKirby Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2007
Okay^^
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:iconsupermariabros:
superMARIAbros Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2007  Student Digital Artist
jus askin can i lyk put in my flashes or website??btw friggin nice song
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:iconhikui-hito:
Hikui-Hito Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2007   Filmographer
geil
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:iconalien-13:
alien-13 Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2007
sweet great job ^-^ :D
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:iconelchido12:
elchido12 Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2007
lol, dat r da bomb, man! nice job
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:iconkrystal-moe:
Krystal-Moe Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2007  Hobbyist General Artist
that was sooooooooooooo cooooooooooooooooool, i wish i could do that.
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:iconmule-radish:
mule-radish Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2007
[link] <--- Close to the bottom of the page is a song called "Are you Happy". There's a part in it that sounds alot like a part in your song. Look. :) Was this song inspired by it?
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:iconryanide:
Ryanide Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2007
Dude, I love ASK and this is one of my all time favorite songs.

However, I wasn't thinking about that tune at all when I created this one.
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:iconmule-radish:
mule-radish Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2007
Yeah, those songs are awesome. :3
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:iconmule-radish:
mule-radish Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2007
I also found a song called fire that sound familiar too.
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:iconthade7722:
thade7722 Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2007
ow, cant play it dude >< u have another link for this?
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:iconryanide:
Ryanide Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2007
Sorry, but this is the only one. Did you try downloading it?

I might put it on Sheezyart when I get the time.
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:iconhikui-hito:
Hikui-Hito Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2007   Filmographer
lol this shames everything ive done in life
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:iconhikui-hito:
Hikui-Hito Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2007   Filmographer
actually, it doesn't
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:iconhikui-hito:
Hikui-Hito Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2007   Filmographer
lol, i downloaded fl studio, its so hard to make music lol, that song pwns btw
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:iconkalesaurus:
Kalesaurus Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2007
Totally awesome music. 8DDD
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:iconmitsulogic:
Mitsulogic Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2007
Damn amazing, i loved it please make more and more.Could u tell me if u just used fruity loops itself or used any sample and mixet it.
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:iconryanide:
Ryanide Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2007
Currently, I just used Fruityloops and it's plugins.
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:iconmitsulogic:
Mitsulogic Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2007
thx for the reply. I just got a hold of a fl demo and its really great, im learning flash as well, and you and NCH85 are really being a great inspiration to do my best, i really thank u.
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Katashi-Vanhandle Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2007
Nevermind, I found the link again! *shot once again* :dead: Now THIS is something to mosh to! :w00t:
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Katashi-Vanhandle Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2007
Uummm...It's just an icon on my cumputer, and it's not doing anything at all. Is there a link I seem to be missing?
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:iconvirtualfox:
VirtualFox Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2007
Very Very intresting techno piece :P

The lyrics match the melodies of the song pretty well (yes i actually sang it and attempted to match LOL) It was pretty intresting for you to mix very the alternate-personality of Karnage with high-sounding melody parts while Karnage's regular sounds lower than the mind's. I was imagening that to be the opposite. these echo/reply parts are pretty intresting in my opinion. Some parts may need slight polishing, forexample you must be very skilled at saying defeated at those speeds. (de-fea-ted is pretty long to say... i just said bea-ted, since it goes with being)

A lot of times when I "attempted" at saying the lyrics the Mind and the Speech seem to overlap a lot of times right after each other, almost continueing the other sentence without any break what so ever, unless you imagened Karnage talking in a very very fast voice (which, i dont think he has due to his tough personality)


I really like the chorus lyrics and melody. (i noticed it only get repeated once)

Very good for an experimental/melody from luck piece of techno... :D
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:iconryanide:
Ryanide Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2007
Yes, well the lyrics don't necesarrily go exactly with the melody. There are some tricky parts which are hard to explain in text and aren't obvious just from listening to the song. And yeah, the second voice is best superimposed, as it kind of doesn't leave much room to breathe.

The defeated part goes "You must be get-ting a thrill
from being con-stant-ly-de-fea-ted-by-me" like that, so it's not that hard to sing at all.

I need more practise making lyrics that are actually singable, heh. ^_^
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:iconvirtualfox:
VirtualFox Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2007
As the old saying goes:
Practice makes perfect :)
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:iconsusakekes:
SusakeKes Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2007   General Artist
geil!
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:iconryanide:
Ryanide Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2007
Geil?
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:iconsusakekes:
SusakeKes Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2007   General Artist
geil= cool! ;)
sry for using german words TT
...my english is very bad
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